Kawaii! Please keep writing! I'm very sorry about what's going on in your family, and I hope you can update as soon as you can!

Woah, this is a great story so far! This first chapter pretty much includes everything that needs to be said and I really want to read more - you have succeeded in engrossing me with this story O.O I love the fact that Hotaru's nickname is firefly and how she meets Naruto and Kiba. I also like how she was friends with Temari, Kankuro and Gaara before. This looks like it's going to be a very I treating read... :P

Great chapter, as always! But I gotta insist that you update twice a month because I keep ending up having to read all the chapters again before the new ones because its been so long I've forgotten!

I can't wait to read more! Please keep writing and update soon~! I love this story!

Awesome story i cant wait to read the next chapter

Love your story! Just wish you could update more than once a month, but oh well

I long for the next chapter

All ur characters are spot on

Yes! You reposted this! Sure, this review is, what, 9 days after this posting, but to be honest I kind of stopped checking your page for a few days. Not that long, mind you; in fact, I'm pretty sure I checked it just yesterday, day before at the most. Hm… don't know how I could have missed it. Oh well. I like this repost, it's very nice and quite different (at least I'm pretty sure it is, considering I don't entirely remember how the original started…), but why'd you take it down in the first place? It was perfectly awsomesh before! *shrugs* Well, it's up now, and that's what's important. I have noticed that Hotaru seems to warm up to Naruto a bit quicker, and is okay with Kiba immediately, whereas before she was much more hostile, or so I recalled. I'm sure she was far more serious, though. I think she was older, too. She's twelve now, right? I think in the first one she was between 15 and 18, probably 16 or 17. I think a younger age will let us see her grow up and mature more. The station scene was also different.

Hey, guess what? Okay, I don't have a month for you to guess. I'm writing another book! True, I didn't finish-

Oh my gumball, I just realized why you took "Story of a Firefly" down! You weren't happy with it and knew you could do better, so you're starting over! Exactly what I'm doing in my first story! Are you going to repost your other stories, too? I hope so!

My next book is a time travel story, so if you want to be in it, make your character, give a time period, and a conflict they need help with. For example, you could be a factory girl in the late 19th or early 20th century that challenges unsafe working conditions! Or someone else! It's up to you! That is, if you want to have a character. I'm also writing a fanfic (yay!) for "Alvin and the Chipmunks". Do not la- okay, fine, you can laugh. It probably won't be on the site for a while, anyway. Go Simonette! What? I'm a superfan! And out of space! Update soon!