Reviews for The New Pages Of Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update, Logan should open up to Carlos! I am like attached to this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL sexy review button XDDD good one...please update soon I like how the story's going, it was about time logan opened himself to carlos X3 cant wait for the next chapter n.n |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great so far. Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think it sucked, I thought it was really good! Please update soon and I can't wait to read more! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is awesome and oh no poor logan what ever shall he do... i feel the same was about BTR of i owned them they would be on HBO or some station like that and it would be late at night and rated M for strong sexually content |
![]() ![]() i just noticed that when logans mom calls him "logan", carlos doesn't ask them about that name. mind-boggling... |
![]() ![]() ![]() story is now taking a much more interesting development :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT WAS SO SESXY I JUST HAD TO PRESS IT! Haha, jk, even if this review button was ugly as heck, i still click it bc this story is just so amazing! I. LOVE. IT. Haha! OOOOOOOH!1 THEY R GONNa HaVE SO MUCH FUUUUUUUUUUN! YEEEEEEEEEEE! |
![]() ![]() ohmygod. Carlos and Logan alone under one roof for a whole week. i can't wait to see what going to happen. great chapter. keep it up, and update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() whatever you do that keeps you motivated to write, please continue to do it. to say this story is good is an understatement |
![]() ![]() ![]() I likes it! Keep going. |
![]() ![]() More more more please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's a few grammar errors, like you said 'cloth' instead of clothes...which is a mistake I make a few times . Otherwise it's good, you just need to describe Logan's thoughts a little more ) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it weird for me to want them to sing the duet 'lucky' by jason mraz and colbie callait? anyways, this keeps getting better |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused, but continue writing! |