Oh so sweet thanks for the read

Perfect. :)

Very moving. I think sometimes the writers leaving a scene to the viewer imagination is ok but at times, it can create conflict. That ending was so abrupt, you know he had to have felt like he was kicked in heart by mule. That was a major league event in their lives and had to have affected their relationship someway.

This is perfect! Exactly how I would imagine it and not too sappy.

This was amazing! This is by far the best post-fugue in red fic I've read. Keep writing; you're an amazing author!

This is so beautiful on so many levels. I love the way you had Jane and Theresa connect and the single red rose at the end made me smile. Jane is ready to move on and find joy and happiness in the world. I am a major JIBSON shipper so I enjoyed this so much. Thanks for making my day. Well done.

Aww, i like it :)

Your writing has described that moment, in Janes house and in Lisbons house slowly, as it was necessary, also to describe feelings of both of them. Nice oneshot fic :)

wow... that was so... weirdly sweet? XD

seriously, we all wanted to see what happened after the end scene, but this, i would never have imagined... it seems a bit extreme but oh well, that's what fanfiction's for XD

very nice story! though i wish it happened in the series :3

Loved the atmosphere . Tender and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

OK, now I don't hate Lisbon as much as I had after seeing that ep ...but I'm jealous :-p LOL

Nice fic. Not really possible, with Jane being Jane and all that, but still nice.

Aww :) Smiley smile !

That was just beautiful!

man i wish this is how the ep really ended! Good stuff!

That was wonderful! Sweet, a little heartbreaking, tastefully suggestive ;) (which leaves you wanting for more and then you feel like the way you handled it was appropriated) Very graphic in the sense of how you start with the description from Jane's point of view, I could picture everything easily. I wish the episode had finished like that. Though, I wish you write a *none* suggestive version (if you know what I mean) or even better: a sequel! *hint*

Great job!