Reviews for The Thinnest Strand |
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daliahussien851 chapter 6 . 5/20 I know it's too late but please continue this story , it is really interesting and I love it . |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/16/2019 Please write an epilogue. I've read so many stories of WC and so few really get it right. Yours excels. |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/2/2019 Yes, epilogue please |
rosayago65 chapter 6 . 9/29/2018 Please add an epilogue. Lots of comfort would be great. |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/12/2018 Love it! |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/9/2017 Yessss. Epilogue, pliiiiiiz! |
SoVeryAverageMe chapter 6 . 11/6/2017 This was great! I really love how Peter realizes that he can't have Neal both ways - he can't admire and respect Neal's skills and want to change him. I think you delve into some really interesting aspects of their relationship. Great work! |
anyctophilian chapter 6 . 8/11/2017 its most likely i want the story went after the incident. lovee this! one or two chapter added will be welcome. neal's recovery also their reletionships |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/29/2016 Loved the all of it! All characters are so very ...themselves, loved the feelings, the fears, the arguments, Peter's fight not to lose Neal well before the balcony scene... and loved the punch to Ruiz as well! Elisabeth is really great and Neal kind of deserves a hug and a knock to his stubborn head (why can't he get someone could really care about him?)! Thanks so much! PS I am afraid it's kind of too late to hope you'll be posting the comfort extra...or am I wrong?! |
PastOneonta chapter 6 . 7/9/2016 Very good assessment of the time immediately after Elizabeth was kidnapped and rescued. Neal was so disappointed in himself and Peter was angry. Thanks for writing. |
arbitrary9 chapter 6 . 1/28/2015 Great story :) |
HAMUCHA chapter 6 . 10/25/2014 LOVE! Haha. Neal's "satchmo has a better sense of direction" is funny. I can fell Peter's desperation to have Neal alive. Neal's determination to let is sad. And I love that they're huddled together, Peter holding while waiting for help. And actually all good thing in live is really just dropped from the sky. I believe nothing good happening to us without being given to us by God. |
HAMUCHA chapter 5 . 10/25/2014 Love! When Neal said "I'm sorry I let you down, Peter." I was like crying and all. And Peter better be sorry. Hope he's crushed how Neal last thought was of him. |
HAMUCHA chapter 4 . 10/25/2014 Love! Aw Neal. If only Peter knew that you choose him. |
HAMUCHA chapter 3 . 10/25/2014 Love! Did you just realized now that you love Neal, Peter? That's why you're so upset. |