This fanfic is one of the best Portal fanfics I have ever read! I don't even know why but sometimes I have that itch to read more, it's just fantastic! Keep up your work, because your just so good at this! ;-)

i hate stories like these. i always cry when they die, every damn time. congrats. this is one of the few that can. well written.

I know that I read this ages ago, but I figured it was time to come back and reread this and to leave some proper reviews!

I love the atmosphere of this first chapter. The scene that starts it out is a jarring juxtaposition of everyday life and Aperture, and is a good indicator as to how Chell is doing right now.

I also love the quiet, contemplative yet anxious mood of the scene out front. The fact that Chell is drinking wine makes me nervous, and yet after all she has been through I can understand how it would be appealing. I also like your attention to detail with things like Wheatley trying to do a memory dump and how his lips move, etc. This is a great way to establish your characters and the setting of your fanfiction!

This was beautiful, thank you :D

Oh god, I'm in tears right now. From the moment you said she coughed, I knew the only fitting end would to have Chell die. The part at the very end where Wheatley said how alone he felt really got to me, and I can hardly see when I'm writing this because of my tears. This fic was the most in character, and most realistic for the senario that I've seen in a Chelley fic.
After that rollarcoaster, I do wonder what happens to Wheatley, since he's all alone, and can only wake up when his cable is dislodged.
Sheer perfection, is all I can say for this wonderful story.

I... This is so beautiful. You have no idea how much I loved this. This is the most amazing fanfiction I've ever read ever.
you sir, have changed my life.

OMG this totally made me cry! Why must it have such a sad ending?

Oh my god, this story is perfect! I was expecting Chelley romance really and I was disappointed it wasn't there, but then I realized what you gave them in this fic was so much better and more realistic.

And the end, omg! I can't believe it! She died. But it's beautiful to think of it and it must happen. Even if she wouldn't have gotten thick, humans can't live forever, but robots can. This would have happened sooner or later. And it's so beautifully written, this story was so long, I seriously didn't think I would read it all, but I did, soaked it up really...

So amazing, you're a great writer

You just stabbed me. Through the heart. Causing my figurative death. Honestly, brilliant story, endlessly joyful and depressing and with a beautiful ending to boot. Beautiful in the respect that it is destroying my insides with its wonderful sadness. Poor Wheatley...

Touché. I mean, seriously. On the other hand, it sure beats the "got married and lived happily ever since" endings littering this place. Got some factual errors too (look at me pointing the obvious for sci-fi genre), but nothing too distracting. Excellent writing, by the way. I like your style.

Okay so I love this. It is fantastic but I have just one question, why does a robot need glasses?

Very impressive.

Very well written, but: it states that Wheatley was the only person who ever cared about her and made her smile; did she completely forget her life? She was raised in Aperture by a scientist who adopted and loved her. Remember? She did that overgrown potatoe battery project? And did she also forget when GLaDOS forgave and apoligized and let her free after the opera?

Oh god I've followed this story for so long and-
Ohmygod that is the saddest ending anyone has ever done to a Chelley story that felt fitting.

I look forward to the next fanfictions you write- and will miss looking forward to a new chapter of this one.

Holey crap...

This was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. It had me bawling when Chell died, leaving Wheatley all alone. I wish there was something I could do for him. :(

Can't wait to read your next stories. Though, I do hope they have a little happier ending.

Thanks for writing this.