Good story again. Sorry I didn't review it when you first put it up. I've been busy working on my own stories I haven't had the time to get caught up on my reading and reviewing and add new favorite stories on my favorites so I thought tonight would be a good time to get a little caught up. I thought it was funny how Velma found out about this Terrie person.

This is so beautiful and sad! TT

(this review might be messed up since I composed it on my smartphone in the app 'memos' and I had to open two windows)

Hmm, hello again, here's another one that I should've reviewed earlier. So here goes:

You are a very very VERY talented author and you better know it yourself! This story msde me wonder a lot of stuff at the end of the first chaptercand I really thought that Shaggy had a secret Girlfriend. And it made me suspicous and I wanted to know more of this 'Terrie' and I suspected that Velma would get jealous or anything alike (as the summary would suggest, a really good summary you got, really). But then in the second Chapter everything changed and it made me sad since this is the reality, this hsppens for real out in the wide world. These poor people in Africa that suffered the same terrible fate as 'Terrie' among with the three other unnamed people. And the fact that Shaggy cared so much for her, And I mean REALLY cared for her! And it was so cute that he kept writing letters to the little girl that would never read again.

The characters personalities were really autentic to the original ones (this is of course onlt my opinion on the matter) and it was very eady to imagine the original characters from any of the movies/series/anything to act like this in this kind of situation. So this was indeed a very well written story ( same goes for many other stories writren by you that I have read and left a review to or just read and forgot to leave a review. Did I get everything now? Oh yes:

And also Velma's brilliant idea to help another child was sooo Velma.

There you go, you have now recieved: the longest, the most expressing, the most detailed, the most serious- review i've ever composed.

And seriously it feels like I'm getting famous here on FF because of my long reviews...

Anyway very nice albeit tired regards- one of your dear readers and fans ~Ho9~

And a continued nice day to you!

Aww! I love this please write more