Why did Remus do this?

Heartbreaking and bittersweet. Well-written story, thank you for sharing.

so bloody beautiful,, please become an author

bloody loved it ! 33

wow what a story! incredible descriptions. made me shiver how good it was!

Thank you for your reviews :) Remus's story is one of particular interest in me, and I'm glad my contribution to it has struck a chord.

This story was perfect. the emotions it evoked and the humour all of it was spot on! An interesting glimpse of Remus transformations. I'm surprised this story has so few reviews but I truly enjoyed it. Your writing is excellent and except for an occasional typo, I have no criticism.

WOW!A really wonderfully detailed episode in the Marauders' life!I loved how even the moments of humour like the 'voice box' and 'micro box' and things like that were in there like a normal encounter but the overall dark atmosphere of the day wasn't diminished at all!Really great job with the characters and descriptions here!

Awesome stuff.

Oh. Wow. I'm quite stunned. I hope you write some more stories. Is your Dora story to continue?

Amazing. So... I don't even have words for that. My eyes are like wide open and I just feel... shocked (in a good way) by this story. It's so good, so descriptive and so sad. Poor Remus. You captured all the feelings and horror and deep sadness that comes with Remus' transformation perfectly. Please write more, if it's what you love I believe you could have a future in it some day. flawless.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful and sad story.

:'(

Original, clear, and painfuly close to the truth. (well, canon, but still). Imma go and see if you have more written, because if this was anything to go by it's definitely worth it.

Oh. My. God.

I am absolutely in love with this story. Beautifully and frighteningly written. I'm surprised that this doesn't have about five million reviews by now!

I'm in love with the style in which you write! It's simple, yet deep. The description of the mood the boys are in as hey listen to Remus howl is amazing. And the way you manage to throw in some subtle humor without ruining the tone of the story is wonderful.

I hope to read more of your work in the future...

JM

This is absolutely terrible and completely beautiful and frightening and it touched me. Very, very well written. Thank you.