This is so cute~ It was hilarious to see Luffy using his fist of love to Roger. You also paired Luffy with an unusual pairing but I approved of it.

Thank you for this!

Oh, my goodness, this is hysterical. I dont remember the last time I laughed so hard at a fic. From the replay of Luffy and Garp at Water 7, so Luggy bothering Colby (the thing about the uniforms is hilarious), Smoker being of the three new yonkos, Sanji and Luffy in the kitchen, and Fanky and Robin being Roger's other parents.

I love this fic so much! It had such a sweet ending too!

Ha ya Luffy who? I only know The Straw Hat

This is the most beautiful future fic I've read for One Piece...

Bless. Thanks for writing it! It was awesome reading it.

Haha, the horror of ATARs. This was epic. Love it!

I do not know if you are even still writing on this side, but would you maybe write about the disscussions Luffy had with the yonkos before and after his talk with Coby?

You can not have had as much fun writing this as I had reading it, I believe. This is the best! And I could also see this happening. The most I like the part "one year earlier" about the new uniforms.
All in all an amazing story!

Bought a tear to my eye at the end there, so adorable 3

Awesome story! I'm glad it ended with Puffy realizing that he was acting like Gaep and Roger wouldn't change his mind at all. Super cute! XD

Beautiful, love it.

This is great. So many funny things! xD & that ending is just perfect.

The funniest part to me has to be, "Oh no! Not the marines and their sticks!" xD

& Smoker being a Yonko? I can't believe that never occurred to me as a possibility! But thinking about it now, I can see it rather easily... xD;

Lift still doesn’t realize... this was great!

Almost fifty years later and Luffy still doesnt know that Ussop and Sogeking are one and the same *lmao

your AUSTRALIAN!? to be precise from MSW!?

BIG LOVE FOR THIS STORY! IT'S AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL STORY!