It would be more meaningful in the future if you ended it with, "Who am I?"

I like this. You’re a good writer.

That was AMAZING
You did a very good job and I especially loved that you put Piper in it! It just seemed so sweet that she missed him without even knowing him ! ️
The only thing that I would want to add was Thalia's thoughts... I always loved the relationship between her and Percy and after your fic where Percy has a concussion and she has to bring him to camp I was kind of executing to appear here too...
But then again, it was wonderful and I've already read it 5 times
Great job! ️️

This is just so awesome!.Great Job!

plz do thalia! they are like brother and sister! good story tho

Ellis with the scrapbook was an amazing idea. I love it!

"He was so blind," she croaked. "I mean, it took him forever to notice how I felt. How could he not notice that I practically stopped breathing when he walked in a room? Or how I hated Rachel so much when we first met. And his stupid smile haunts me whenever I close my eyes and I can't stand it."

Yeah, he was so blind. Since she was always running after Luke (right into his traps), and defending the traitor, and comparing them. How was he supposed to notice? Made me wish he stayed with Calypso, or Rachel had not been the oracle.

your stories are one of the most nicely written stories ever...keep up the good work

Just wow.

Very well written and I like the concept of the scrapbook/memoir... It puts a greater emphasis on Percy's absence but my favourite would have to be the Malcolm and annabeth bonding; that was awesome! :)

Oh god... You made me cry... That was so sad... So remarkably feely... Love it so much.

Beautiful.

Almost poetic. Very lovely.

This was truly an admirable piece of writing.

This. Is. So. Full. Of. Emotions. You captured them perfectly! I actually felt as if I was there!