Reviews for Tortured
rabbit keys chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
I really like Elyan and can't find a lot of fic with him. I like this a lot. Good job.
JoyfulWhispersInternet chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
this is why you're my favorite author, because you think about all the cast, and give them personality and feelings. i liked this one, since it shows how Elyan must've been feeling. they should definitely do a special episode for each of the knights and their backgrounds.
AGDoren chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Excellent story.I love writing for Elyan there is so much to work with with his character.
josy daky chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I really like the fact that you write about elyan because it seems that no one, not even the writters of merlin care about him. Nice story.
Magical Moo chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Yeah, Elyan definitely needs more love!
DarkEyes chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wow, I loved this! Elyan is my favourite knight and I completely agree with you, no one gives him enough credit. I mean, he's been captured, poisoned, watched his sister banished, possessed, tortured and yet he still stands by what's good and right. Most people would've given up hope after going through what he's endured. So thank you for recognising that and writing this awesome oneshot.
KareenaK chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Two thumbs up. There needs to be more stories about Elyan.
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
That was a really really great story! I really enjoyed it. I was so sad. Poor Elyan. But, I really liked the ending. Sir Elyan the White. Indeed!
MerthurObsessive chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
This was great! Really enjoyed it and it was really well written. Great job!
princessozmaofoz chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Aww! Poor Elyan. I just wanted to give him a hug. I hope he lets Gwen and Merlin know how he's feeling. I'm sure they can help.
Loopstagirl chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Oh wow, that was absolutely beautiful! Perfectly written and you really summed him up well, which I personally think is something hard to do with Elyan - like you pointed out, he doesn't have anything too defining!

Loved this!
Sydelle Rein chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Poor Elyan indeed! I'm glad at least Merlin noticed something (in your fic at least, if not in the show.)

Thanks for posting!

~Syd
Mrs. Bonner chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
This was really nice. And I like what is says about quiet heroism and quiet sacrifice.

This piece begins to stoke my imagination. I would love to hear more of this story - hear HOW he got himself together after he decided to do it. Maybe it would show how really making the choice to stay gave him more resolve to work through his recovery and face his demons. Maybe it could show how a person might recover from PTSD ("post traumatic stress disorder").

I really love your oneshots.
horsegirl332211 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Kudos for remembering Elyan! I was surprised at the lack of stories(aka none) after the finale. :) this was really good!
DragonflyonBreak chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Aww, poor Elyan. I liked this a lot! Nice job!
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