YOU LIKE MY LITTLE PONY! THAT'S FREAKING GAY AND RETARDED ALL IN ONE ! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU BRONIES AND PEGISITERS!

This is MegaTJ reviewing live on the outskirts of Haven City, and all I have to say is "awww..." Yep, this story is absolutely adorable. Well, except for two things, but that'll come in the formal review. I enjoyed this story so much that I've even been inspired to write my own Octavia fic!

Formal Review:
I have to say you're wording and connotations were amazingly extravagant. You have managed to keep me from the rest of the world with this work of art. Other than one or two honest typos, you're grammar is quite divine. You're references were expertly placed and your connections were neat and accurate. I only have two complaints.

The first is the rating of the story. With the amount of adult situations, this story at least needs a K rating. Though, if the rating were any higher, I never would have even glanced at the story. (I wouldn't like it much if this story got deleted because someone that didn't like it were to report it.)

Second, I'm not particularly fond of the idea of Octavia being the sister of Pinkie Pie. I don't dislike the idea, no, not at all. It's just...so unexpected that it's hard for me to grasp it. Well, this is only my opinion and this site wouldn't be called if it didn't have the fanfiction, of which, yours is near perfect.

Your Writer Profile:
Based on this story, I have come to the conclusion that, of the Thirteen Spirit Writers, you are undoubtedly a Purpose Writer.

Purpose Writers write because they find the joy in accomplishing their purpose to please readers with their literature. This joy is reflected in their writings by meaningful phrases, memories, connections and other such things. Many don't care what others think of their stories because they know that somewhere out their, someone appreciates their work.

Above all, you are a Purpose Writer.

I adored the story. Happy Writing.

May the purest of fortunes find you and your work and may the eternal blessings of the highest and bluest of all the widest skies rain down upon your stories.
-MegaTJ, the Wandering Dream Writer

I LOVED IT! You considering making a sequal?

Gahhh, over already : Welp, I enjoyed it. I would write something that pointed out all the good points and the faults, but honestly, I mostly only do that for fanfics I didn't like... SO, it was good, and that is all I really have to say :

that was a really sweet story. )

Update soon please. This is great!

Nice story but chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1. Looks like ya' miss uploaded there.

Still cute idea

I.. This.. Amazing.. Take.. Money.. All of it.

I loved this first chapter, I can't wait for more.

And that song isn't House of Pain by The Game is it?