You have a wonderful talent for writing. I just couldn't understand how Bella has these incredible talents and has been told about the prophecy as being the most powerful vampire - yet she is worried about werewolves and Aro? It doesn't add up to the bad $$ image and fear others have of her & Jasper.

This story was amazing! Thanks for sharing!

WTF?

But doesn’t Caius hate the Children of the Moon? Why would he be working with them?

Great story but it was also very confusing... There were many areas where in one sentence you made it seem like they were in Washington and then the next it was like they were in Texas and as I said that is really confusing but besides that I loved the story

In case I neglected to comment before, I adore this character. Totally original. Glad she got a happy ending with the removal of the witch's curse and a family so she won't be eternally alone. More outtakes or her own story would be interesting if you're ever so inclined. Thanks again for sharing your talents.

A quick review. Just finished rereading both "Human Elemental" and "Prophecy". What wonderful stories they are and clear evidence of your talents as a storyteller. Thanks again for sharing your gifts.

This is one of the most unique and creative stories I’ve ever read (along with its prequel). Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I hope to read more stories featuring Jasper, Peter, Charlotte & Bella in the future!

I guess that idiot Aro has forgotten she is an Elemental and make clouds appear so his plan of attacking while her werewolves are weak won't work.

R Carlisle is so full of hate or Esme wasn't really his mate for him not to be in pain from her loss I gather Jane isn't bothered by her brother being dead.

Let me get this straight she can make a whole state shake and Trimble and she is afraid of Aro an d his bunch of tools. explain to me what is her problem. has Eleazar told her earlier with her power she can control any vampire .Hell when They show up all she needs to do is cause Aro to blow apart then go to the next one.

Aro will be be so pissed now that he as lost half of the witch twins,his best fighter Corin is female. then again he won't be around long enough for it to really matter.

I'm surprised that Amun has never thrown a fit since Bella more or less took half of his coven away.

Why should she be afraid of them? all she has to do is send a wall of fire to destroy them or bury them half way in the ground while her people decapitate as many as they can before the others free themselves .then just rinse and repeat again until all of them are gone up in smoke.

It's our not out. thought he would call the baby William Charles instead.