Harry is kinda scary but in a cool way!

I can’t figure out if Terrence Higgs giving fealty was good or bad for Higgs.

Story is getting interesting!

I am sad to see that it looks like book 2 has been abandoned but I thank you for the excellent story ! I hope you just found something that you are more fond of than writing and are still in good health. I look forward to if you ever do come back to writing and hope you are well.

Much much better than the original !

Love the story !

Good story. Glad I saw it recommended

Best ‘caught in the act’ ever!

Awww, that should be nominated as Best Tweener First Kiss Ever!

Why is power screeched at us in all-caps? Is this a Creature!Harry fic? It didn't say so in the summary. Why is Harry's name changed to Hadrian? His name is Harry...right? Harry Potter? I'm so confused.

What?

I know you're never going to answer this, but I wanna know why you put POWER in all caps. It's not bad and in no way hinders the story, but when I'm reading in my head and my brain suddenly screams a word at me, it sort of startles me everytime. I do enjoy what I've read so far though, so great job.

This is a very interesting, and well written story. Thanks for writing it.

(Reply to Twilight comment in notes) I agree with you, the books where well written, and the movies terrible... however my problems with the series are ENTIRELY the Jacob/Edward debacle... though it COULD be a commentary on rape culture, come to think of it... micromanaged Bella’s life, to the point that he ALLOWED her to do things, sometimes, if he didn’t know better... and that is wrong on so many levels... it can be inferred that Bella was a self sufficient, if clumsy, young woman, who’s mother was more roommate,than parent, leaving Bella withfar more responsibilities than she should have had(discribing her *renee* as flighty, and scatterbrained) So Bella would have known what she wanted, and been self assured enough to know how to get it (if rather alone among her peers, because that kind of maturity makes hihshcool difficult) which adds to why she loves the Cullen’s so much, she is around other mature teens her age, so of course she latched on... Edward was the only one single, so ... however she also ended up loosing most of that, to the point she could barely function with out him, that’s about as textbook topic relationship as you can get...(also the minor issue in book one about Edward LITTERLLY showing that he would rather she died than stay with him)... as for Jacob, she saw him as a friend, and he wanted more, a fairly common issue to be honest, but she made it clear that she wasn’t really interested, and further, that even if she WAS interested there was someone she wanted more, ADD TO THAT that Jacob would eventually imprint on someone else, and leave her alone again anyway, and you have a selfish boy who couldn’t take NO... going so far as to force a kiss on she didn’t want, never wanted, and had made it clear repeatedly...

This story start relatively good vos other crap i found latetly unfortunately you maje one of greate failures, drago is/will be my friend that is a complete and utherly crap. From your pairing I still hope is not a gay story as all draco is my friend stories.