you have a beautiful way of leaving things unfinished. like. never actually explaining why alfreds the way he is. or in the other story abt pen pals where francis “feels smth in him break when his best friend moves to be with his boyfriend” and the fact that you never continue with him! it haunts me in the best way. i don’t remember seeing that executed in such a way so that the side character doesn’t seem forgotten by the author, just by the character or the story or whatever i’m not saying this right but stunning job. if you ever wrote a book i’d love to read it.

Wow that was a great story, you did a good job on it. : 3

Oohhhh mmmyyy gggooodddd. The ending was so cute!

Awwwwwwwwwwww so cuuute!

This is amazing holy shit, he SPAT in his burger, just iconic

Ahhhhhh my god I loved this! I really like how bitter you made Alfred. Most people make him happy or clueless but I feel like he's always had an underlying bitterness. You really brought that out without making him a psychopath or the bad guy or whatever. Is Matthew okay? Like he lost his hair but it doesn't really say anything else. I was kind of hoping for a little franada or pruscan action tbh. Oh well... What did Kiku want when he approached Alfred like that? Idk if it was to interview him and get a 411 on what's going on or just to make him feel insecure and have an episode or what. There are a few grammatical errors but overall you did a fanominal job with this story. Keep writing!

Bwahahahaha!
You scared the shit outta me with the comment the reporter made.
Nice!

Omg I love this

Honestly, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read since I found myself in this god damned fandom.

This is fucking amazing, and honestly, Alfred and Arthur have never seemed like such a badass couple as in this story. And so well written, I couldn't put it down, so to speak.

Omg i love how you wrote this idek but the style is so beautiful and all and i love this ;w;
Alfred is so different here haha! But i liked how you handled his character and it's refreshing to see this kind of Alfred as well XP God i love his sharp tongue haha!
Look forward to more stories like this!;)

That was great!

super duper great story!, love the storyline! it is sooo sweet, romatic, funny at the same time FEELS worthy.

ah! and of course the smexy scene ;)
soooooo sooooo soooo effing H.O.T!

one thing bothers me, is mattheuw ok now? oh please I so hope cause I love his character.

Writer, I love YOU! This whole story has been just perfect! And I never lost interest once! The development of their relationship was just beautiful. The other band members were funny too. I just hope Matthew and Gilbert were OK.

Amazing! Bloody amazing! You make magic my friend. I hope you continue to work so hard and create other masterpieces! And I'm definitely going to check out your other fics :D Keep up the good work