I loved the characterization of Jacob and Bella in this story! The beginning was wonderful but honestly as soon as he went to college and the other women got involved...it didn't make sense. Ryan/others were brought into play but they were anticlimactic and has very little to do with the relationship. Not to mention the whole "girl literally asking to get in Jacobs pants" and him not don get anything (at the pool party) and still defending her as his friend...literally didn't make sense and just made me annoyed lmao. There's plot holes and unresolved scenarios, overall this story once again had potential but did not meet up to expectations. Also all this sexual tension for no smut scene? What's even the point?

I wish someone would get me a $200 vs gc hahaha!

If you change his hair and eye color and all y u named him jacob black ?

Yhh I'm done. You're more interested In writing about ex's and possible competition to even properly progress their relationship. I've read as much as I can.

And Ryan again... don't think I will read anymore.

Why did you have to cut his hair? The more I read the more disappointed I'm getting

You mention Ryan just as much as Jake. Kinda annoying

Nothing is actually happening between them

Loved it! Great story!

Ahhhh such a great story I loved reading it

Wow! this was an awesome and fun story to read, wish it never ended...

AWWW! so romantically cute! I love stuttering Jacob...

ROTFLMFAO! A.J. IS TO DAMN FUNNY!

uh oh!

it can't be over already?! "POUTS!"