Hi! I really love your stories but there were just some things troubling me.

1. I like the idea of Rose wanting to join the Dragon Club for privacy or so that people can stop gawking at her. Problem is that this conflict wasn’t presented in the events prior to her attending a Dragon Club party. I just find that the sequence of events was too fast or all too sudden. It would have been nice to see Rose encounter a situation wherein her need of privacy was clearly presented and not abruptly like it was just an afterthought.

2. Scorpius said he wanted her gone in 15 minutes to win the bet, but when Rose said that she’d like to join the Dragon Club, Scorpius didn’t bother stopping her, and was actually the one to point out the leader. I just found it odd, that’s all.

Thanks for the delightful story! A nitpick is that Scorpius saving Rose from Dolohov is a tad too convenient as the way for Rose revealing their relationship to her parents, even given that the story is a teenage drama.

I just read the hole story and I love it a lot! Thank you so much for posting it! But I have one question... how could Rose use magic at home even when she was underaged? Viral hug from Switzerland

Hey! I was just re-reading it because it is one of my FAVOURITE fanfics ever... And I went into dreamland... What if after Scor and Rose's wedding, Zander walks up to her and says 'Damn, Malfoy'... Ok I'll just go and cry now

Amazing story and I only have one thing I would like you to change: Please mark it as complete, you have made me suffer thinking it was not complete for so long when it was just not marked :)

/kajjjann :D

Oh my fucking god!I hate Lucius.

I cannot believe it is finally over. I read your story a year ago, January of 2013 to be exact, in and fell in love with it, but it didn't have and ending, I wondered what happened next almost every night for a month, but then I kinda got over it.
Suddenly, yesterday, I thought of rereading the story for fifth time but I searched in google instead, and I found this.
There are no words to say to explain such an awesome ending. For that I'm grateful. So yeah, loved your story. Bye.

Just finished a re-read of this story, which I inititally read around the time that it was first completed. Adding it to my favorites as it is worth bookmarking. I hope the sequel has not been abandoned, as these characters and storylines are quite enjoyable.

Holy fuck! This is one of the BEST scorose story, I've ever read!:D I'm so happy I read this story:) Thank You for writing this beautiful story:D

I am not ashamed to say that I cried when the memories took them back to Harry, Ron and Hermione's first year. Thank you for that. I really loved some of the ideas you had in this, and you presented it so well (which is something I can't say for quite a lot of the fics on this site). So, er, yeah. Don't know what else to say. Apart from that I loved your view of their characters.

overall review: meh. I truly loved the concept and the characters, all of them and how you interpreted the canon ones and created the OCs and developed them. there were tons of cliche bits I didn't like so much. also the writing style was very sloppy. you kind of just said everything, very bland. also the dialogue fell flat several times. all that being said I've checked out the dates of publication and I can tell you that you've improved tremendously! I Chose You was excellently written and I loved your writing style in that one, so I wouldn't worry too much. For Dragon Club 2 (which I highly recommend giving a better name) I'd love to see more Albus, particularly Albus and Grace. best wishes to you!

Please let Rose remember! I love your writing style.

This chapter must have been tough I found it hard to read. I loved that Vance got his.

Loved It!

Nice!