Reviews for Mystery Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is this discontinued? If it is please let us know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant!~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you still writing this? I'm really enjoying it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 1 was interesting as was the second up until the mention of mobile phones: in the '90s they were huge and bulky, and had absolutely no capability whatsoever of having numbers saved into it. What you're thinking of is the newer version which came out after 2000 (programmable for users), which is then way off target for the continuity of this story. Caller ID at the time was relatively new for landlines as well, which were not cordless yet. After seeing such an inconsistency I find myself unsure if I should continue reading, as there's now a greater possibility of finding even more anachronisms further along... No offense is intended here; I just greatly appreciate it when a writer takes the time to make sure the technology they use actually fits into or exists at that point of time. (Historian in me being picky, basically.) Still, this concept was certainly able to pull me and many other in, so well done on that. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() maybe have ed run into the gang at the ministry looking for his wand and have him end up changing things so Sirius doesn't die? btw, enjoying the story. Im glad you wrote it and i found it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow the fairy names sound SU-ish. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() FAN!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wayyyyyyyyy better than expected when I first started reading. I find your take on the hp world very interesting and illuminating. This story is brilliant beyond belief and I can't wait for more. Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry about it. I always get writers block. The longer the wait the more excited I get when there is an update. Really well done. Love the fox idea I can so see that. Well it looks like he is slowly getting there. I think he is going to be really pissed when he finds out what happened. Like why he was in the prison and how he lost his memory. I was thinking it would be cool if he ended up at the department of mystery for the fight. He jumps in front of Serious and saves him from the killing curse (by accident). Everyone thinks he is dead and is about to keep fighting when he restrains them all. He could get the rest of his memories here. Not sure what to do with Darco though. Have him hiding somewhere. It would just be funny. That is just an idea. I can see Ed getting really annoyed. Well take your time, I will always be ready to read and enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this great chapter... keep up the good work and update more soon please! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I ️ This story it was very good. |
![]() ![]() Why is his beard tied with a thong!? |