I'm gonna love this story. :)

I don't know what the real reason is, but I hope it has to do with the only character tagged in this story...

I know that the author doesn't read these anymore, but this is... akward. My Oc is named Blazing Dawn. What are the chances!

Yes what could it be.

I'm 1 if ur followers

Nice. Did the seqauls come out yet.

this chapter got me realy into the story it seemed pretty hard for Da but he pulled through.

YAAAA NICKLEBACK

Thank You, so much Thunderhawk this story made my day, I loved it and of course, I'm also a writer so, we're both related in stories and novels, so I'll get some ideas in your story, so I'll consider your story a novel even though it has 4000 words, so thank you once again, MAY THE FRIENDSHIP BE WITH YOU AND WITH YOUR SPIRIT! Someday, I'll adapt this for a dramatic reading or a film, maybe, but remember this is awesome, your Fan, Arthur Snippers, bye!

This is so not like Discord. But other than that this chapter was awesome! ;)

... Well... I love DashixDan, but it bothers me a little that Applejack will try to break them apart. I don't know... It just doesn't feel right.

He didn't he finish his sentence again when was about to say, "How do I write if I don't have any fingers?"

I like the part at the end that when Dan was going to finish his sentence, he disappeared.

As soon as she said she didn't get to tell him the news i just started hating zebras

He is definitively pony version of kratos. But he doesn't have scars... Yet

I fucking love that song