Thanks a lot for writing and sharing! Great AU scenario. I was really glad this wasn't the typical "girl randomly saved by superhero and falls for him" story, they actually had a great background together and the false memory twist was a cool surprise! I loved all the characters :D

I love this! Can you please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write a sequel to this? Maybe they have kids...

Hey there, I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story! The plot is so detailed. The character are so well developed. And you have done an excellent job of not just tell the reader what the characters are feeling, but making them feel it. This story made me cry (in a good way) You are a brilliant writer

Lol this doesn't seem like Artemis but it is great even if it doesn't completely capture artemises personality

Anyone else feel the AOS Tahiti project right here? If you've watched Agents of Shield seasons one and two?

Luna, I loved this! This has been one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. You are an amazing writer.

Wow this was really good! Such a great story.

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I Just wanted to tell that your story is very good . I loved read it ! In fact I am french but reading this story in english wasn't very difficult, the words were simple even if there was vocabulary. Again I really loved your story.

Ps : Sorry if made vocabulary/grammar mistakes I'm only in my fifth year of learning english .

I know u can't respond or anything cause I'm a guest right but I forgot my password so I can't login? But I'm just wondering how can Artemis be olives only niece when Artemis has a sister

I love this chapter ! - kit cat17 out

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I loved it! It was all so passionate and romance-y. (Insert your favourite love song here) Please write more.

You'll probably never read this as your now a published author and all but thanks for writing such a great story :)

Ok. I'm really sorry about this, and this must be getting really annoying by now, but I promise that I'm just trying to help! You don't make as many mistakes as other writers, in fact you make way less. It's not you, it's just the perfectionist side of me - I'M SORRY! XD Anyway, to the point: Zatanna always says her spells backwards, it's not just random gibberish. Like if she were going to say "find Jade Crock" she would instead say "dnif edaj kcorc".

In this chapter, you first described the bus driver as "an elderly lady" but when Wally yelled at the bus driver, he said "old man". Not trying to be a "grammar nazi" here, I'm just trying to help out. :)