You should do a chapter of Johan teaching Livy how to ride a horse, and of Johan teaching Livy archery and sword work for the first time, and of Livy teaching Johan and Peewit how to play poker.

You should do a chapter where what happened when Johan and Peewit first brought Livy to the castle.

I loved it and I wish I was like u . I am a big fan of your stores. I might have spelled that right. My name is Taryn . Soooooooo c-can we be f-friends...

I got chills, they're multiplyin', and I'm losin' control

Cause the power you're supplyin', it's electrifyin'

Wouldn"t it be funny if Johan sang that?

Aw, this chapter broke my heart! It was terrible picturing that nightmare in my head. I felt so bad for Livy. Well at least her new friends are there for her. :)

Oh Livy! I am so sorry. I've never be beaten, but I have been trough crushing emotional pain before. Hey, I still have it now. It hurts Pysically too. Remeber, your uncle can't hurt you anymore. If I ever meet him, my parents will call the police. But it's ok. You've got Johan, Peewit and the smurfs protecting you. It'll be ok. Love the story. Please update when you can.

That...was...beautiful! :') The ending anyway. Poor Livy, her uncle was uncontrolable. What a horrible enviornment for a kid to live in. (Hugs Livy) Thx for mentioning Joannie. That was sweet of you. (Hugs you) Amazing work. I love your work, its smurftastic. Next chapter, plz? _

Aw, poor Livy! Don't worry. Everything will end up alright in the end. :) Next chapter please!

Alright Livy! I knew you would win! lol Another great chapter. I'm off to read the next one now.

Amazing! Plz, next chapter! I just love your work girlie!

Oh Livy! I'm sorry you felt that way. it's very painful. Hope it gets better. Please update this and Questions soon!

Haha! Livy's a poker freak!XD

Loving the story. Livy is awesome. The story itself is really good. LOL at Robert!

"All that proper up her-"

"ROBERT!"

"...nose..."XD

Sorry, been meaning to review but I keep forgeting. Love this whole story, except for the spiked drink icident, but I just love this tale just the same. Please update soon!

Aw, so fluffy and adorable! Livy and Johan are meant for each other. :)

Looking forward to more!

Very fluffy but very nice. But I'm jealous. I want Johan to rescue me! Just teasing, but seriously, who wouldn't want a handsome knight to rescue them? But I love this.