Reviews for In The Rain
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
how can Alex accept her brothers feelings? just like that? just because of a kiss? That does not make sence. If I had a brother and he kissed me, I would hit him, where the sun don't shine. This not realistic, noo offence. I don't mind Jalex, but it went too fast. Don't get me wrong, I loved the beginning, but the end... :/
Emma chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
OMG! I love this story so much! It's just so sweet how you portrayed them. I love your plot line and just the general story. Keep writing!

emma
TheHawthorneEffect chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
It's sad, but in a good kinda way. Angsty happy ending!
Rawrrr chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Awwwwww! That was so adorable. Couldn't help but squeal with excitement. I loved it so much. I really really hope you continue to write more fanfiction! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Make a sequal. PLEASE
yoshiman777 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
a great story with a perfect ending.I hope to see more stories like this.
xxunbrokenxx chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Great one shot!
break me like a promise chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Jade! That was amazing! lol. Loved it! But-that word- fine. It's your story. And it was amazing!