Okay but honestly I have always wanted and still want for them to have ended up together. Gah!

Squeeeeeeee

That is a very sweet, happy ending. Oddly, I think it would make both Sarah and Jareth much happier than the ending in canon.

Nicely done.

Sincerely,
Miriam

So sweet! I know some variations had Sarah returning 3, 5, 10 years later when she was older, which may fit a bit better with modern sensibilities. ;) This was a very romantic take on the alternate ending and the writing flowed well.

Nice story!

I really liked it!

Is it a one shot?

Sincerely The Sign Painter.