This was absolutely amazing. Perfectly written from River's perspective. Creatively answers so many questions too! You have a real gift!

That was really good. It was an interesting concept, and was very well executed. On top of that, it was quite amusing at some points. I think that quite a lot of fans can understand exactly what River was thinking when she got charmed by the Doctor. He's got quite a quirky lovableness to him.

Kudos,
Liz

This was AMAZING. Also, this made me laugh: "Great! Raise me up into a moral quandary and then die on me." Good line.

Loved it. Brilliant work. :)

love it

That was fantastic! You really portrayed her well. :)

Lovely fic! I really do love your writing style! And you portrayed River really well, delving into her thoughts and feelings at the time in a lot of detail. Looking forward to reading some of your other works! :)

Wonderful insite into RIver. I'm really enjoying these stories!

Hahaha, I love how it's kind of simply beautiful that you write all her mediattions on the happenings of that important day in her life, then end it with 'he IS hot.'

Love how you presents Mels/River! The dialogue sounds like both of them showing the transition period and the last line just perfected the story.

That was so very... River.

I abso-bloody-lutely LOVED it. Like, *LOVED* it.

This is fabulous and cute, yet gorgeous and quite sad. I loved your writing and only noticed one grammar mistake. good job!

I love seeing this from River's perspective.

Oh, this is wonderful. Thank you. _

That is the bestending in THE WORLD!