Amazing story.

i must have read this about ten times and i still think its one of the best fics ive ever read. the development of this is so perfect, the language, the characterization of mord sith, their interaction, everything is so spot on. you explore enough into every angle- the drama, the emotion, but don't get carried away, which so many fics do. so yeah, well done. just a great story arc

Super good, one of the best legend of the seeker fics I've read

I loved this story! I've really been wanting a Berdine/Raina back story, thanks for writing it. The poetry by Catullus was a really nice addition as well. You did a very nice job of showing what Mord'Sith culture might be like and I enjoyed the unique characterizations you gave them. The only thing you really could have done to improve the story is to add lines or extra spaces in the scene changes, those were a little confusing to navigate. I hope you write more LotS fics!

Oh my God, I haven't even finished this story yet, I just wanted to say that you made my night with the Catullus. This is brilliant, absolutely brilliant! I love how you wove it into the story, and of course, for anyone who understands a little of the background of the Catullus poem, beautiful!

Mord'Sith romance-absolutely loved it. And very cool with the intermixing of Catullus, gonna have to find some of his work. Really liked Berdine.

Beautiful story.

This is all very lovely, though I adore Cara and it bothers me that she gets beat.

This was utterly amusing. I love how they play off each other.

This chapter was unbelievable interesting and I feel Berdine is a, to say the least, odd Mord'Sith.

I like how the different stations that they hold were unknown on the first meeting.

The second was very fun also.

Unfortunately, I never was able to see much of this show, but I know a bit about it and do like these ladies so I read the stories anyways.

Yours is already very promising; it's either a repost from Livejournal that I may have read some time ago, or a lot at once. Either way, it satisfies :)

Thanks for sharing!

You blew up my email but I find this to be quite interesting and will continue to read. With that said:

I feel this was a good way to introduce them, it for some reason feels natural. Also, I can see the way they can play off of each other so job well done.