Yay! Rory saves the day. Curious about the figure in stormcage though. If that is who I am worried it is I will be stomping mad.

On to the next one! I am devouring your stories at a rapid clip and loving them to distraction.

Sorry I had to add this comment. Tart archaeologist who sometimes dresses up like the Stig. Oh My GOD! The BEST description of River Ever!

I am loving how you are writing River because I honestly couldn't stand her either. The Doctors reactions are just perfect and especially loving the interaction with Rory and Amy. You have caught the dynamic of their early relationship perfectly. Poor Rory really did get the short end of the stick for most of series five which was particularly annoying. I did love the clerics though and was sad when they all were taken by the angels. Interesting retake on their first meeting!

Onwards and upwards! Poor Donna and yes thouhh the Doctor is an idiot it really is all River's fault!

Exciting. The birth sequence, especially Ianto's terror was funny. Things seem a bit different with River. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Now I can get back to the Jane Austen story. But first, damn you! I actually felt an inkling of affection for River when she was interacting with Bad Wolf Rose or whatever she's suppose to be.

I was praying for Rory to show up. At the rate the others were going it looked like Donna was going to end up delivering the baby herself.

Thank goodness for Jack and his vortex manipulator. I was having visions of Donna and the TARDIS delivering the baby. I will gladly wait for explanations for River Song as long as I can comfort myself that she isn't his future girlfriend. Also I don't know if its this chapter or the last one but I loved that the Doctor is only being nice to River so that she would sacrifice herself in his place at the Library.

Zara is so hilarious. Guess Donna doesn't find out what Chloe means until way later. The family dynamic in this series is so precious. I'll admit I try to avoid fics in which they have kids, but it doesn't slow them down at all in your series. There's still adventures, time travel and mysteries galore.

Bloody River Song. If she knew what was good for her she would stay clear away from Donna. Wonder what she called the Doctor for this time.

LOL!

I can soooo see why River is hated here. I hate her here. *chuckle*

A highly amusing, highly enjoyable read, much of which made me laugh aloud as I read. 10 out of 10 stars!

I ordinarily don't reply to a fanfic or review it until I get to the last chapter, but I had to stop and tell you the end of chapter 2 ("Lady go bye-bye") made me laugh aloud, which rarely happens when I read! Love it! Onward to the next chapter...

May I just say that I am SOOO glad you did NOT have River be the one to deliver the baby. . I don't know if my brain could have handled that.

Also, wow, I wonder how far "back" we'd have to go to find a River who didn't have an ego the size of, well, the universe? LOL She's just so full of herself! How special. *snickers* Can't get enough!

much love!

I love how convinced the Doctor is . . . LOL

And you've certainly kept River . . . in character. I wouldn't want to say anything that would be crass, so we'll just leave it at "in character" *(huuuuuge air quotes)*

Not that this is a BAD thing, at all! She's perfect! -ly evil. :-D