This story was off to a good start, too bad you didn't finish it tho.

Why does everyone start out with such great stories, but then just abandon them?

more.

Update please

This is a very good story, you should continue writing it.

Dear Author,
I think you should continue this book as far as the prologue is concerned you are a good author. The chapter seems interesting. I hope I get to read more.
And I would prefer it if you finished it because half of the people that start books like this never finish them. And put in a few plot twists to make your story unique from the others.
Sincerely,
The daughter of the Sea,
Emma Potter

Please update please

I love the idea you have here. I hope you add more to it soon!

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Oh, yes continue you have a great starting foundation to build your story on.

good, good nice intro. I lke your story and I really want to know how your going to do this to decide to make you a favorite or not but I will make you one for now. XD

Please keep writing it sounds like it going to be a good fanfiction :)

Continue please

Really good start, please update soon.

*swimmer98*

Really well written! And don't apologize for it being too long - most of the other ones like this are too short. My only question is, what time period did the demigods come from? Please update soon.