Very Well written ;) great story

Good one-shot.

I love it how you can capture perfectly damon's and alaric's personalities so that they are exactly like in the series! Excellent! :D

Holy crap.

Just... OMG I LOVED THIS FICTION SO MUCH THAT HURTS. So sweet, hot, cute, flawless, beautiful and dçlasdksdãlkdãskfd! Just cannot think properly right now.

Congratulations.

I love this! Their relationship is so much fun!

This fic was perfect in every way. You write them so in character and their relationship so believable. Lines like, "Hi. Damon Salvatore. Vampire. You might remember me from this morning's orgasm," and "Nothing to write with. Blowjob?" Were so hilarious and definitely things I could picture them saying to each other. The end was great with Alaric finally accepting Damon vamping out on him and wanting to keep the scar. So sweet.

Love the banter between them. It's great. Thanks for writing this to go into detail about the scar!

Can I just first say that I adore your writing? It's so straight forward and to the point, but really packs the punch. Fantastic!

You captured their banter perfectly and both seemed perfectly in character. And throughout the back and forth, you managed to include some pretty adorable sigh moments.

Great job. I really loved it. :)

Ugh! Very hawt...perfect ending too!

I am not even mid way through the story and I ha to start this review now. You have Damon down so freakin perfectly it's startling.

It's not very often I come across a one shot, well a fanfic in general, that impresses me across the board. Not to say I'm the one person you have to impress but I've read a lot of fanfics so I do have some experience. And this was great. Really. The characters are perfect canon and you still somehow manage to make the relationship work beautifully. Great Job.

80 million stars.

WiseD

The notion of Damon being all confused and ruffled, and Ric being all pissed off and freaked out is great! And them being territorial, with the bite/scar/claim thing, is great too! :)

awwww cute

I loved the lines about Elena and the others! made me laugh so hard!

cute little story. liked how they bicker like an old married couple

Loved the story it was sooooo freakin awesome write more plz!

Ah, so great to read the story behind the scar. I love it.

Especially how Damon is so hurt by Rick not understanding his vampire nature.

Loved the quip about written apologies and blowjobs. So very much how I imagine those two. Wonderful story!

(LJ:Lady_Dragoncrow)