I just read this entire story in 2 days, and wow, I have not cried so much while reading... Ever! This is amazing and you have created some amazing characters!

lol so my name is Liberty and I was writing the end of Patrick Henry quote Nd accidentally capitalized Liberty (give me Liberty or give me death) and when I noticed I shouted "Aaah! he's not a creepy stalker!"

Wow. Just, wow! This was absolutely gorgeous! I love how you tied everything together, like Mags and Haymitch and the Hanging tree song. It was so sad, but so very beautiful. Good job! Thank you so much for writing this!

Soooo good. And soooooo sad. And yet happy. I like what hou did, making Hamitch Alaric's grandson. And her writing a book with it all on it. Genius. I never would have thought of half of these things.

They're horrid. The putrid smell, just as we assumed, comes from them. They're long, fat looking creatures. Low to the ground they run like wolves, but on closer approach some of them walk on their hind legs like bears. The whole body is covered with a kind of armour like skin with tiny spikes all over. Their teeth are small, but razor-sharp.

That sounds like the discription of the monsters at the end of the ranger's aprintice series book one the ruins of gorlon.

I fucking knew he was lying! Awesome story! :D

We are all just pawns in the games that they play.
-Beth M

I absolutely love this story and i love your work. I would say edit and proof read a little harder because i see some typos throughout the story. However i've been ignoring them because i love the story so much. Overall, i love the imagery you use and i've already cried which i didn't expect to happen, great job.

I like it. If I may, you tend to be a bit wordy, but I do like it a lot so far.

I read this, and I'm so impressed. I've never read anything like it before. This is, single hand-idly, the best story I've ever read on .And I've been reading stories here for four years. Everything about it, Elevens betrayal, Alarics death, CRISTOFF'S DEATH (OMGOMGOMG) and the second uprising. The fact that Emera grew old, and knew Haymitch was fascinating. I wonder what mera would have thought of Katniss. She's probably love her. This is so beautiful, dramatic, gory. This is one hell of an amazing story.

Keep writing, you're incredibly talented.

I liked the confrontation scene between Emera and Jasmine. This is so amazing.

I like that she's refusing to play the Games. I love how the lullaby is made by Cristoff, it's sweet and amazing to think it lasted long enough for Katniss to sing it. I liked reading about the rest of the tributes, all of them being punished because of the Rebellion. It's interesting to read, but sad at the same time.

I'm worried to see how this will all play out. Does Emera know what she volunteered for? I like how she is sort of like Katniss, because she volunteers for Alexia. The plot is so unique, and I'm eager to continue reading!

I love this, the beginning is so strong.

I never thought that a fanfiction could EVER make me cry.
Thanks for proving me wrong.
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((By the way, I can't wait for the sequel of 'The Phoenix.' (: ))