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So sweet (:

Omg the ending was so cute! And you have the best sreen name ever! They were taking such good care of James, and I know this wasn't slash, but am now a Kames fan! I really loved Kendall in this, willing to do whatever, even if it meant undressing James. And how comfortable James was with him! So adorabl(:

That was sooooooooooooooo cute! I need more!

Aww man... That was the cutest story in the whole entire world! I loved the ending so much! All of them snuggled together, that was so cute! Loved it! Great job!

Just one thing, when you change dialogue, you have to put it in different paragraphs. Like this:

"I don't feel good," said James.

"I know," said Kendall.

NOT like this:

"I don't feel good," said James. "I know," said Kendall.

Hope that helps. But I loved the story. You have great writing skills. Great job! :)

~ BigTimeRush-BTR

Amazing! I love it! :D