Lol this is great

I enjoyed the 'choose your own adventure' approach to this story. Ah, those crystals are almost as sketchy as that *bleeping* dragon.

WOW that was cruel.
But amazing nonetheless. :)

So sad! Morgana so self-destructive. In the end, Emrys always was his fall. This story is magic.

Interesting.

Very dramatic.

Well done.

what happened you are evil you are a terrible person great writer but a terrible person

This is so sad... I don't usually read sad stories, but I loved this one. It literally made me want to cry. I've always shipped Merlin/Morgana, but I think that too many people have her repenting her sins for no good reason. This story was realistic, unlike most of the others, and I think I'm rambling now.

WHAT?! OMG! That was really good but gah!

I loved the ending. Nice story. Keep up the good work.

Oh My god! Why Dif you Write this.

It's so good. Fantastic. Fab

Yea, your merlin stories rock

You're right, you are evil. I'm guessing that it's the second choice because you said ended, whereas in the first choice it was more of a beginning. Although I'd like to hope it could be evil. But still, quite beautiful and haunting and I love you anyway.

That was beautiful. This has been my only hesitant non-canon ship in the whole show, and I didn't even know you were going to do that when I started reading but it was so beautiful! I am going to keep reading because I want more.