whoa there sakura! Don't rush!

I loved your story and except for the ending… What she said… Not very Sakura… Perhaps she could say something else that would make sense but be more in character? Because I honestly could NEVER see Sakura saying that. Good work, but try for a better ending next time eh? Cause the endings are what make or break the story. If you end with something sloppy, out of character, random, really just terrible, ect. then no matter how well written the rest of the story is, it all just kinda crumbles apart and turns into a lousy story. Like when a really pretty ribbon isn't cut properly so the end frays and unweaned and it ruins the once beautiful ribbon. Get what I'm saying? Hope you do a better job ending it next time.

~ N.S.O 彡

Nice job keeping the characters in character :) I liked the reason you came up with for why Sakura always pretended to hate Naruto before.

I liked this ... mostly, but for that last sentence. Oh, also, you got to make Naruto less of a wet noodle. He has in the past stood up to Sakura!

~jsm

i really enjoyed that i adore this fic

Finally I finished reading this. I started reading this the other day but got distracted and couldn't finish. Now I see that was a mistake. This story was great. The last line was humorous, if slightly random.

Peace,

Born From a NaruSaku Lemon

I loved it!

Omg that was soo funny thank you for writing this story.

this fic is so sweet and good

This is a good story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.

Aw! I love this! It made me laugh so much! xD The ending line was so amazingly funny. It does sound like something Sakura would say though. -