The best fucking story of. Batman i ever my fucking life!

A class-A finish to a class-A story :) I'm looking forward to what you come up with next!

Keep writing!

Ayla

I'm going to congratulate you immensely: you have written an absolute gem of a story. Everyones in character, our OCs are believable and you write beautifully. Its unfortunate that I only discovered this today, on the verge of the final chapter!

Everything is so well thought out and strung together, and I love the plot. In fact, your story is one of the very few that genuinely brought a tear to my eye! Especially at the funeral for Crane at Arkham - I had to choke a sob at the thought of them all singing!

I am anticipating the final chapter, but I can tell it won't let me down already. Keep on writing!

Invisible Ayla

Wonderful. Read since the beginning, and I must say, this was one of the best stories I've read on this site. Can't wait for the sequel. Good luck

Wow, that was long xD But I love reading lengthy chapters :'D You've really captured my interest, I really am looking forward to more :D

Great chapter! I appreciated how long it was! I love nice long chapters! They give me extra time to really get into it! All in all, great work! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Good chapter. Excited to see what happens in chapter 4

This is great, I really enjoy reading this :'D There is so much excitement going on, I can't contain my hyperness at the moment! :'D

Liked the first two chapters better. This one was still good just more predictable. Will read more later.

Enjoyed chapter 2. Great dialogue exchange between Eddie and Clea at lunch.

Digging the first chapter. Starting on the second chapter now.

I only read the first chapter so far but it is awesome...to bad Jonathon crane died in it. He is my fav. character. Oh well I wil read the rest later...I have to work on homework

Great work once more, poor Phobia, he's losing himself and poor Doug :'/ I really did feel sorry for him but it gives him no excuse to be a bully :s I can't wait for more as per usual :)

Wow I am finally getting around to reviewing! So sorry I am so behind! All I can say is great job! Each chapter is better than the last! Keep up the great work!

I think this story has wonderful potential! Its a fresh main character with a great style that is incredibly "teen" in a sense. I love how the relationship is done with eddy and clea because its expected, just two weirdos that are different from other people but similar to eachother.

The best thing about the fic in general though is the "amatur" feel. Mentioning real things like movies and books is not liturature material, but this isnt a book. Its a fanfic that is awsome and is itself instead of what other people want it to be. I hope you update soon and give it some vilians from the comic for phobia to fight!