These little oneshots are really interesting, and very creative.

Oh, how I've missed this...

I've read an insane number of Rumbelle stories in my time, but this continues to be one of my very favorites! Not only do you remain in-character and canon-compliant, but you also add your own creative twists, such as Belle's chip and now Rumple's coin trick (And going deeper than the show by exploring the differences in Rumple's physical and mental cages is great too!).

I also love the duality of your stories. Reading the viewpoints of both the storybook and the Storybrooke versions of the characters adds a new level of depth to your fic and the TV show itself (Yes, your story has officially become my headcanon.).

Once again, this chapter was just as wonderful as the previous have been! I can't wait to see where the writers go with Rumplestiltskin and Belle in the new season and where you go with them, as well.

Till next time!

SWeet!

Is this over? Are you doing a sequel?

I am REALLY enjoying your pieces on Storybrooke Belle. I've only started reading OuaT fanfiction, but I haven't come across a better presentation yet!

Also: I know it says completed, but are you planning on writing any more chapters?

Oooh, loved the references to Disney's "Beauty and the Beast!" I feel so sorry for the Storybrooke/book Belles- both trapped in their own ways... And I can't wait for more development between Belle and Rumpelstiltskin (In the show AND in your fic! :D).

Are you going to do any chapters from Rumpel/Mr. Gold's point of view? Maybe delve into his relationship with Belle in the Storybrooke world? Or what happened to her?

Again, your chapters are absolutely wonderful! Hope you update soon...

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You didn't tell me you updated! Here I've been thinking that it was a beautiful, COMPLETE story, when- all along- you've been adding more chapters, and I've been denied of the epicness! (Not to go all drama-queen on you or anything... :P)

Anyway, still loving it! The format (How it switches between Storybrooke and Storybook Belle) is perfect and just offers more insight into her character. Brilliant, and I hope you continue to add to it! :)

Okay I'm hooked hope you write more soon!

I love how much insight we are getting into belle,can't wait to see what else comes

I didn't know you were going to continue! I like this chapter at least as much as the first. It's kind of sad, how Storybrooke Belle seems to almost remember so many things while kind of rejecting them. I think you could end here, but if you keep going, I'll be sure to follow. :)

Yay! You updated! I'm so happy! Just one little thing. None of the characters remember who they are in storybrook can she remember? Just curious. Anyways great chapter and I can't wait to read more soon when you update!.

Yes! I guess Storybrooke Belle is so interesting because she's still it's more herself than any other Once Upon a Time citizen (you know, they're fairytale selfs) and thats why we all are so anxious to find out what will happen with her and Mr. Gold. I find somehow more fragile Mr. Gold in comparison with Rumpelstiltskin and he'll be more eager to be with Belle now that his power is definitely bigger than Regina's.

But this chapter reflects their missing parts. Those shattered hearts and what Belle do to keep her memories...in some way, drawing. Her mind still has those memories.

Really look forward to the next chapter. Wish you lots of inspiration.

xo

Very cute concept!

I love the comparation. It would be interesting if she has the chip part as he has the cup to match (on the serie). All broken things can be healed. It's such a matter of finding how.

And yes, "Skin Deep" was the best episode of all. RumpelstiltskinxBelle are my favourite couple. I don't think I can wait until they see each others again. *fan girl mode*

TTTT All my tears. I approve of the idea that she has the chip. This should be in the show.