Wtf.
You might as well have written "drama happens" for all the meaning this chapter had.

i love the music you chosed it was perfect!

it is unlike maxus to be kind to people it freaked me out be apart from that it was funny and loveable!

So I don't normally like stories where the author goes on to elaborate Lucy's new strength because it's always way to OP and ridiculous but I really did enjoy this story. It was great. Though I do wish there was a little bit more tension in the beginning interaction between the two. Over all it seemed pretty well thought out and I love how you didn't spend to much time elaborating on Lucy's training, and use her memory as a way to progress the storyline.

natsu is officially a stalker.

omg when it says a scyth. and its shaped as a crescent moon. I imediently thought of ruby rose from RWBY

it's sooo epic! your story is so amazing! I'm happy you finished it!
(hard lalu shipper .hysteris)
aww, they're married! sssooo cute~
hope natsu meet someone. seriously.

thank you for your hard work!

Natsu is jelly~

awww I want more! its really good tho

So... is it a boy or a girl?

thanks for the great story :)

The story was pretty good. I especially liked how it was written in a style that resembled that of the cannon and its atmosphere. However, it would have been great if the actual romance buildup was expanded upon. I would have really liked to read more about Luxus and Lucy's adventures during the 3 years of training.

ok never mind they are not dead

what the shit you killed gajeel and freed

im sorry but where is levy she was with gajeel during that or is this a different s trials in this story and please dont hook him up with anyo e else i just cant see either of them with any one else but each other