Loved it. Keep it the way it is. You'll ruin it if you change your original ideas. PLease keep writing. Another interesting story to keep my eye on.

WOW Ichigo realy is a bastard here. It's refreshing. don't make him to much of a basterd please. Sometimes it's hard to read when he is generaly such a good guy. But then again a little bit of a bastard is feasible.

I still liked it!

Read ya soon.