| Reviews for Arthur's Mansion |
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JustAsterous chapter 6 . 1/3/2014 Eep! I do hope you continue the story soon, leaving on a cliff hanger like that is just cruel. I'm unbelievably hooked on this story and I think I cried once or twice, though I can't really pinpoint. It's... Wow. Your writing just absolutely grabs me. I'm excited to hear that you haven't dropped the story - at least there's something! Plus, it's been... About two seasons total (half of winter, a part of summer, and all of autumn) since this was last updated, meaning you'll probably be uploading a new chapter soon, right? I do hope so! I'll be keeping a close eye on this, for sure. See you in the next chapter! |
JustAsterous chapter 3 . 1/3/2014 1) Are ghosts/spirits able to experience different feelings and think for themselves? For me, they can. Maybe not think for themselves, but they certainly can feel. 2) If you were to be haunted by a ghost of sorts would you be scared of it? Even if it showed no intention of harming you? Nope. At first, if it was doing creepy things, then yes. But after a while, if I confirmed it must be a ghost (somehow), I'd treat them like a living person and have them as company. After all, they must be rather lonely (even if I myself like being alone). 3) What do you believe the reason is for ghosts to stick around instead of moving on? Unfinished business or a bitter death (in which they were filled with hate and anger before they died). |
JustAsterous chapter 2 . 1/3/2014 1: If you answered yes to the question from the last chapter of whether or not you believed in ghosts, what makes you believe that they are real? A type of... Sixth sense, if you will. Like a gut feeling. It's more spirits of nature then ghosts, though. I believe everything has a spirit, especially plants, and they're all connected and we're all connected in some way. It just makes me uncertain of ghosts. I'd believe they were real easily, if I could just find a way if how they'd fit in... 2: Is there anything else you believe in? Like fairies, aliens, ect. Nympths! 3: What do you look for in a fanfic? Creativity, enthusiasm for writing, in-character (and if not, then a good logical reason, as to why), clearly decent grammar and punctuation, details, good writing in general, some sort of idea to 'spice' things up in originality, something thought and emotion provoking, etc. You name it. |
JustAsterous chapter 1 . 1/3/2014 My god! Isn't this a turn if events? You've turned an idea I've read probably far too many times into something that feels refreshing and new. It's the way you write - you've got a style about you that can make me get scared even when I know exactly what is going on or make me feel as much pity for Alfred as the townspeople even though I know they're most likely wrong. It's such an odd feeling, but I love it! Keep up the amazing work! Oh, and: 1: What is your opinion of Ghost!Arthur? Badarse! Sorry, I just have to speak my mind. It seems like he'd be lonely, but you've portrayed him as a man to be feared and respected, and for that I dub the undead you create as badarses. 2: Is Arthur really as mean and crazy as the people make him out to be? Just misunderstood and bored. I'd probably do the same thing as him while he was living if I got that bored. 3: How is Alfred going to deal with the ghost? He's going to flip out, and then pretend like everything's okay and that ghosts are totally normal. 4: Do you believe in ghosts/spirits? You betcha! Mostly spirits, because I'm a spiritual person. |
elizabeta H. Austria chapter 6 . 8/23/2013 Okay I shall wait *sits down on your couch and sleeps* |
Leo et Lab chapter 6 . 8/21/2013 Not a problem! I look forward to your edits and will keep an eye open for updates. :) |
Arcaze chapter 5 . 6/2/2013 This fanfiction is really awesome, it's written really well. Update soon :) |
GODHELPME MAKING NEW ACCOUNT56 chapter 5 . 1/26/2013 I have a feeling he's dead or just a chibi eue Thanks for the update. |
felicianoludwig chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 i believe in a combination. you should well know i have. and he is wonderful in here |
felicianoludwig chapter 3 . 1/22/2013 it depends on the ghost i think that if they just dwell on one emotion long enough that it will become the only emotion they feel kinda like the "if you keep doing that your face will stick like that" if the ghost showed no intention of harming me i think that i would be nervous at first but after a while not be afraid of it ( as you well know i am a very out going person) i believe there are some but not many, maybe to look out for someone |
felicianoludwig chapter 2 . 1/22/2013 i think that aliens MAY exist but if they do then they probably won't be all that different form humans. i hope fairies exist but not any where around cities. and as for ghosts... well if they do exist my afterlife will be busy |
musicalvampire chapter 5 . 1/22/2013 must read mooooore! i havent heard much of this fic in a while. im glad it resurfaced! who's calling his voice? is it the devil? ivan? the souls of the people artie has killed and ground up and made into pie?! |
mintbunnyisreal chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 It finally updated! I love the story thus far. A ghost story, yet somehow not quite classic of one. I truly cannot wait for the next chapter, but I will for as long as I must! |
Leo et Lab chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 Woah! This is so cool! I can't wait for the next chapter, and is the reason Arthur is stuck here because of Francis, or some demon he summoned? Are they the ones (either Francis or the demon) that are still here as well? Ah wait, DON'T TELL ME! I'LL JUST WAIT! . |
Aerodiety chapter 5 . 1/21/2013 I'm guessing the voice at the end is Francis...? This is really good so far, please update soon! |