Tor was part of team rocket? That's unexpected o.O

Love this story! Is Tor based of off Blue/Green from the manga?

So why did you post an entire chapter of the Pokemon Special Adventures manga as a fanfic?

This is such a cool fanfic! I love it! I love it! I love it! _ Red seems quite a bit different from Ash though but I don't mean that in a bad way. Please have the next chapter up soon. Oh and this is going on my favs as well.

told y i would review

pretty good story, though the romance could have being a bit more angsty with a happy endin you know the ones which makes ur blood run cols and makes it inspirtational?

sorry i don't have much time to review and i'm blabbing on...i didn't even read most of the 2nd chapter i've read it once before so i'm going by how i read it last time

anyhow i'll email u a betetr review some other time

cya~!~!~!

Hey guys, thanks for the reviews! There's plans for a sequal... yayz!

greate writing i know thay you rote this from the story but i hope that you can tell me name of that manga because i been looking for

it and i have not found any so if youcan tell me were can i purchase one i will be greatefull!

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The name of the particular Manga is "Pokemon Adventures: Desperado Pikachu!" and it can be found in most local bookstores.

It's the first in the 3 part series. Or maybe a 4 part series? Dunno. Anyway, if you want me to scan you some pics, just email me!

(), and I'd be more than happy to try to send you some piccies! _

Thanks, and cya

greate writing i know thay you rote this from the story but i hope that you can tell me name of that manga because i been looking for it and i have not found any so if youcan tell me were can i purchase one i will be greatefull ok

All I can say is keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. :) Till next time.

I'm going to look forward to more stories such as this. It's abit odd to read Ash/Red and Gary/Blue, with Misty as herself. Original for this place.