Ch 6: Pointlessly dramatic. Could pretty much skip the entire chapter.

Nami's the one who's the selfish bitch!

Why the HELL would you kick an old man? FUCKING SHITTY COOK! GO FUCK YOURSELF thats all i have to say to Sanji actually i still have alot more of insults

I'm sensing this story is going a big and long ride.
But just keep in mind one thing: your repeat the same idea in the same sentence more than once. Try to stay away from redundance. Ne?

Well, it was a very awesome story and thank you for writing it. I actually wrote a very short story (still on my computer) based off of this. I may use the "dark haki" though. Thanks for the inspiration, good luck with your future work.

Can not wait. Please,do your job.

I can not wait. Do a good job. I'm enjoying it.

Please continue!
It's a great story!

Pretty good chepter overall though i personally think that conversation between shirahoshi and luffy kinda dragged out a liitle bit but thats just for me
Update soon

Standing Ovation for this amazing update man. I read the chapter and the author note to figure out Luffy drastic change but you made it work so no compains here man...Shirahoshi being like Hinata I agree but i will be honest I'm not a NaruxHina fan I'm a NaruxSaku but NaruxHina is cute cuz Hinata is just to shy I like strong girls Like Nami, Sakura and Misty those are my faves.

Thanks for the clear up, and while I may not completely agree with all of what you said, I do accept it as this story's truth.

I'm not trying to bring you down or anything, i just wanna help. Keep on writing!

Hmm, I may have missed it, but was there some kind of short scale time-skip? While the attitude change is to be expected, I can't say that how fast it changed was realistic.

Sasuke, while an emo before his defection, didn't suddenly change personalities or his personality didn't just get darker, it had time to develop into the cold-hearted bastard he is today.

Finally its about time you update the story , i have waiting like crazy for this chapter to come out anyway good chapter and i hope you can solve your life problems and update soon

man you made my Independance day it had suck so far but your update made my day...agree the crew has not change that much and also no comedy in One Piece is just not One Piece. Hope you solve your problem soon can't wait for next update take your time man we can all wait for a great update a couple of month's again.

Holy crap... AMAZING! I hope you update soon, this is one of my favorite op stories so far, keep it ip :)