Reviews for Instead of Going Under
I Am Definitely Jeff Bridges chapter 17 . 6/4/2018
I know I already left that gushing review on When Spring Comes that basically said I love everything you've ever written, but I've finally got around to re-reading this, and it's important to me that you should know I think it's magnificent. I stand by the statement that you've become a better writer since, purely in terms of the clarity of the writing, but I don't think I've ever read anything that captures the relationship between Percy and Nico as well as this does. I know you don't explicitly say that Nico has any kind of mental illness, but this is also an incredibly accurate depiction of depression, and honestly, overall, if there's a way to say this without sounding like a total sap/weirdo (there probably isn't, but Imma do it anyway) it's one of the most genuinely powerful things I've read for a long time.

So, TL;DR: this story's great and I love it.
Quihi chapter 17 . 4/22/2017
That was good. Depressing, but now that I'm older than when I first read those books, it seems a lot more likely than having a totally happy ending. So, nice job. This seems like it would have been really hard to write.
PJF4E chapter 9 . 3/4/2017
Is Nico still gay in this fic?
Wahboop chapter 17 . 2/6/2017
Oh my, I loved this. Honestly, there is so much room for PTSD in all of Rick Riordan's books, and the fact that you took that and developed it really well is just amazing. Thanks for the story!
Madison Futch chapter 17 . 1/21/2017
Is this over?, because if it is, I'd love a sequel. If it's not over, I'd LOVE to hear the end.
HeartThrobbingFanticyLover chapter 17 . 9/26/2016
this is so good. it was a while for me to finish this but it was good.
Epiphany Aria Grace chapter 17 . 10/24/2015
Wow. I am simply blown away.
There's no other way to put it.
You're both an amazing writer and a wise, beautiful, strong person, and I don't even have to have met you to know that.
I hope I'm not scaring you with my compliments, but just like Percy tried so hard to tell Nico, you really deserve them and I really mean them.
Stay strong
Sir Heroden chapter 17 . 6/12/2015
This story is so good! The story was touching and emotional and the process of rehabilitation was realistic enough, but also tied in with an exploration of Nico and Percy's relationship. Great job! (once again)
BlazePheonix chapter 17 . 6/5/2015
Please update soon, I want to see what happens next
ObsessedwReading chapter 17 . 5/26/2015
Awesome chapter and fanfiction. :D
vibranium chapter 17 . 5/4/2015
Yay you posted the final chapter! Thank you for writing this amazing story. :) I haven't read fanfics on this website in a while but I was always hoping that you would finish this. So I'm very happy right now. :D
I can't believe it has been almost 3 years since this fic began. I feel lucky that I got to read it from the very beginning. I really like your writing style and the plot for this story was amazing.
Anyway, thank you for updating and finishing this story! (-)
AM83220 chapter 17 . 5/4/2015
An excellent and fitting finale to a most enjoyable story! Have no fear, my friend; your ending was very well-done. Now, how about a sequel to "Halfway Out of the Dark":)?
general zargon chapter 17 . 5/4/2015
Hey there, I'm really glad that you managed to post this last chapter, typos and all. Feel that warm feeling of accomplishment? Savor it. :) I enjoyed this story from the first chapter all the way up to this last one, and I hope that you decide to write more for this fandom someday. I wish you the best of luck on your writing. .
Madi chapter 16 . 5/2/2015
Pls update soon? This is my favorite fanfic probably ever, you portray Nico amazingly, and Percy is just like in the series!
fan12399 chapter 16 . 2/22/2015
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! I'M BEGGING YOU, THIS IS THE BEST STORY ABOUT NICO I'VE EVER READ! Sorry, went a little crazy with the caps lock there, but, seriously my life depends on you updating this story. So please update it and I will love you forever! And give you a whole bag of Sally's famous blue cookies!
253 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »