this was beautiful :) great story

This almost made me cry! D:
But omg it was really good :)!

Ooh taht was heart-breaking to witness. Usually,Kouji would be the one to leave but what you did here was really good for the other option. I like the flow of emotions and the neat, vivid description. Keep writing!

I have some strange feelings about this story. It was definitely well-written, but it also felt a bit overdramatic. Of course, I've never had a long-lost family member, so I probably barely know anything.

Anyway, it was very vivid. It almost seemed like the preliminary to a much longer story, but I guess it isn't. Keep up the good work!