Dang it! Your stories keep making me cry! Bravo though, they're very well-written

lovely!

So brilliant! Ah, I got chills! Eleven/River is such a fantastic pairing, and you captured them so well, especially amidst all of the timey-wimeyness of The Big Bang. Absolutely wonderful!

This was as beautiful, heartbreaking and confusing as i wish they could've portrayed them on the show. Absolutely stunning. You deserve more reviews!

This was such an incredible story—I loved it because I've always wondered what would've happened to River when the Doctor hadn't existed because his existence shaped hers. Really spectacular.

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It's never been so clear to me why I dislike(d) River but adore everything by you. The River you write isn't the over-fangirled, obsessive, self-centered always-three-steps-ahead-of-the-Doctor-in-high-heels, sexy River who bothers me. (All right, she's still sexy.) Your River is what Steven Moffat has been aiming for but I've been quite blind to, who is so, so broken inside. I mean, I still have problems with her, but you've opened my eyes in many ways - which is one purpose of fanfiction, after all.

I just looked back over this comment and realized it's not exactly... tactful? That really wasn't meant to be River-bashing. The whole point is that I don't see her that way ANYMORE usually. If I've offended you, I'm terribly sorry, I didn't... *sigh* I love this, okay. I love it.

Madis, you kill me. I love this story, even more than some of your others, (and that's going some). It's timey wimey and perfect.

Oh my gosh! Another BEAUTIFUL fic from you!

I was confused, at first, but about halfway through I got what was going on and it was wonderful. Such a good idea, well done viewpoint, and, as usual, your daring and jumbled sentences spelled perfection.

"River, I'll have you know that Time Lords do not get conniptions. We are blissfully conniption free."

- Made me laugh out loud.

Thank you!

Oh, River...

*sigh* Once again, so, so beautiful. You are amazing. :)))

~SA~

That made me of course she'd be fading there, fading just like him, until...sniff!

what a crazy lovely brilliant life river leads...

I liked this, I read it twice but it still makes sense, I could tell it was the wedding area.

"why is everything always collapsing"

Wonderful! You do a fantastic job of how the different timelines are running through her mind as she becomes the catalyst to Amy bringing the Doctor back. And your word use is really good: "It had brilliant words, words that could change galaxies, disrupt governments, topple gods. It held so many, many secrets. Spoilers." Beautiful job.