It's brilliant, both the start and the middle. However, the ending part just doesn't let me shake off the fact that Nami is, well, kinda butting in their relationship.
Don't misunderstand. Overall, the whole thing was wonderful and sweet and sexy. It's just that the last part should really be more concentrated on how Luffy and Zoro gets along on the ship, and not Nami as the protagonist, you know?
But again, all in all you did a magnificent job. Well done. Brava!

OMG that was so good! I loved how it felt so real and sweet! This is one of the best One Piece fanfics I've ever read!

Fantastic story! Well done :D

So I really do love this fic, for serious, but I noticed that Robin was uh. Non existent. Did you just forget about her or..?

Absolutely wonderful:-). Everyone is marvelously in character and its beutifully written.

Great story!
Loved it!

Amazing filler for the Anime. I somewhat hope the animators would just put this as filler instead of Z's Ambition Arc. LoL. This would excite all of us. :)
I really love this story, basically Luffy and Zoro are BAMFs. LuZo feels everywhere.
And you write them in-character too. :)
I really love your writing style because there was no dead air to any part of this fic. I love how you describe the parts, like, 'she knows he's the one making her mandarin trees shake as he blows his nose' (and there were a lot of stuff like that which gave a series of uncontrollable laughs and painful grins), and how you play with words, it's nice to read poetic presentation of stories. :) This fic is really entertaining and fun, yet it has so many feels that made my heart leap out. I freaking laughed, and kind of sobbed at the kink part. LoL. IDK, when Luffy and Zoro were alone, they just exude this sentimental vibe that made me all emotional. LoL.
Thank you so much! You are amazing. :)

well...that was intresting...

This was wonderful. I love it!

"but some words were made to be whispered into the skin"

"feeling as if his mouth full of sand and hopes."

What beautiful lines.

I actually teared up a little, just now. I was so overwhelmed with feelings, too stunned by the brilliantness of your writing. It was a little too much amazingness to handle within the timeframe that it took for me to read the story. Every few minutes or so, I had to stop and scream out to the world "HOLY SHIT, WHY IS IT SO GODDAMN BEAUTIFUL!" (thankfully no one was at home at the time). Your writing is the embodiment of the beauty and capabilities of language and literature. Your writing is breathless word-gasms and palm-sweaty-heart-palpitations. I've never felt such
intense heights of literary pleasure.

I just. Unable to can.

Absolute FAVORITE LuffyxZoro story ever! I really enjoyed the writing style and little story line. I 100% hope you write more LuffyxZoro in the future! They're my downright favorite one piece couple... Not gonna lie. :D

wow what a cool story. I like it a lot. It's a very rare occassion you can find a decent LuZo story.

Why this story didn't get many reviews I don't know. But it's amazing and deserve more than this.

I like how you make the story flow, not just an excuse of smut scene. And the lemony part was hot and very real.

Thanks for sharing, hope you can make more story like this!

Anw it's my account name, I just got lazy to log in.

Keep up the great work!

it was a beautiful story :)

the nakama-ship between the crew was great, and the luffy/zoro part was really cute :)

continue with the great writing