Aw, Naoto is so not smooth. I was laughing at Naoto failing to carry all those textbooks or sign her love notes, and Rise being wise to the seduction attempt and teasing, but then failing to carry through on working up to make a move herself. And Naoto not being into Rise's music, RIP, but being supportive anyhow and getting her a guitar strap. And Yosuke and Kanji being fail wingmans, heh. Really cute.

Wonderful.

awwwwww

Ahhh, this will probably remain my favorite oneshot for a long, long time. Just read it for the fifth time, and its still equally enjoyable. Definitely one of the sweetest and funniest things I've ever read. Your Naoto-style prose is just hilarious, and I love both her and Rise in this story.

Excellent work on this.

I really like this
This would be a really good manga
I would really like to see that
Especially since most of the manga about this pairing is nsfw
And this is one of my fav persona fics
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Lovely story.

This was really cute, and I loved how awkward you made Naoto. I really enjoyed this! :)

I really liked this story! I thought you did a great job with the pairing. It was very awkwardly cute lol.

That was the most adorable thing I've read in ages

I absolutely love the humour you inject into the story, laughed out loud quite a few times!

P4 Arena rekindled my fondness for this fandom, and I've had a hankering for Naoto/Rise, and this fic is exactly what I was looking for. Argh, cute awkward babies 3 I just wanted to hug poor Naoto the whole time. This was perfect! 3

BEST

BEST, BEST, BEST, BEST. I loved this! I've recently gotten madly into this pairing in a big way and this was absolutely fantastic, thank you so much. You write them all so in character and it's just so horribly charming and delightful I literally sit here laughing my head off, it's so brilliant. Keep up the good, work!

HELL YEAH! i looooove Naoto X Rise!

And I never thought this pairing could work... yet here I am, loving them after reading this story.
You managed to make them complement each other so well. Also, Naoto's characterization was really good, if not perfect.

This is one of the reasons NaotoxRise is my OTP. Naoto is so lovable, everyone is in character, I just love everything you put in here!

Best of luck!