Well written with excellent characterization. Good work.

Love it. Hope you update soon!

Oh I remember commenting on this-when you showed me the word doc, but I haven't reviewed, eh? XD

Anywaaaay. Aww Allen. Aww Kanda :(

I liked it that Allen kicked him once he snapped out of it, as if it was part of his struggle to remain as himself and not being taken over by Neah. If I made sense at all. #heh.

But anywayyyy. I wish it was longer. Like, additional scene where Allen woke up again later? Would be interesting, I think. But this is nice too, Allen's trying so hard the poor kid ;_; and Kanda can only watch and I can feel his helplessness because there is nothing he can do and-
yeah okay. this is getitng long XD

Wow! Tat was really good! I love all of Kanda and Allen's dialogue! It was absolutely wonderful!

Huee, nel, the last sentence hits me at all the right places. /clutches heart

Wow I like this extended version a lot more

thanks for continue writing yullen -

There I reviewed X3 it's nice, and it's awesome :)

Beautiful piece, as always! Short - but so poignant. (:

Right. Allen MUST win..:D

It's good that Kanda stays on Allen's side. Nice Kanda. Take good care of him.

Hmm..cute

Lovely, Brilliant writing! The descriptions were gorgeous, I could see it happening and they were both very much in character. Poor Kanda feeling so helpless and poor Allen for getting such a hard lot :( Can't get over your wonderful story!

Brilliant! I love the changes you made. The first version was already exquisite, but now it's even more beautiful. Good job _

Man, you're so good with words. and the descriptions, I always feel like i'm watching a movie every time i read your stories. So well-done. beautifully arranged words, it never fails captivating me.

On top of all, your characters grasp is amazing. Always so perfectly in character that i can imagine everything really happens in the manga. Your Allen is strong, cunning, and still you can portray his pain so well. I honestly hate it of authors make allen like a blushing little virgin. And you're the only author so far on FFnet I know to not make him like that. your Allen is so IC! and your kanda isn't a super awesome seme like most authors like to write. He's not sappy as well. He's just... perfect. In character. I like your writing that i can't stop writing this review xD

BEAUTIFUL! I approve if DGM really become like this xD

It feels so CANON D

Wow. Really allen, you MUST win! Kanda's hoping for your safety!

awesome story, i hope you make a sequel!

beautiful :)

it made my heart ache ;_;

Also so well written. I love how you managed to make them so IC too, I even feel like maybe Hoshino would make this in her next chapter xD