Reviews for Abandoned
Ashlin Raine chapter 10 . 7/19/2018
I don't understand what Dumbledore has to do with Snape possibly losing his job for telling Harry what was going on as McGonagall is Headmistress.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/25/2018
NOT MY SON YOU BITCH
spnfan2005 chapter 34 . 12/26/2017
love it please write more
Nina chapter 2 . 6/20/2017
Hermione would never abandon Harry. Never. She's the most loyal and compassionate out the three. She's was practically his sister.
RomansBride chapter 34 . 10/20/2015
Loved it
dawnraptor chapter 12 . 9/13/2015
I'm sorry, but there are so many typos and mistakes that I find impossible to read this fic.
dawnraptor chapter 9 . 9/13/2015
Dumbly made a statement to the Prophet? (what is the profit? a gain, perhaps?) But... isn't he dead? We have a headmistress, haven't we?
dawnraptor chapter 4 . 9/13/2015
It's very disconcerting. I'm Italian and my English is mostly self-learned and a little rusty, but I can spot a lot of little mistakes that are marring this story, this very chapter. I have to read "The owner just wished that the horrors that the inside of the manor could be washed away just as easily" where the second "that" is clearly wrong.
Trial e trail are not the same thing.
"The wife of the manor had fallen that day and left a whole in the others worlds." I suppose you wanted to say HOLE, not Whole. In this case you are writing the very contrary. My grammar is subpar, but I think the last words of this phrase could be wrong too.
There are a lot of this mistakes that are really bothersome, because they distract the reader's attention from the story. It's a pity, cause it's interesting, but you risk loosing readers in this way. I don't know if you have a beta, but I think you could use one. IMHO.
MysticFireBlood chapter 34 . 6/30/2015
Outside of a few grammar and spelling mistakes, this was a great story. :)
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 34 . 4/19/2015
I like this story. It is a good story.
Lavonya chapter 6 . 12/3/2014
I actually cried from this... poor Harry...
Lavonya chapter 4 . 12/3/2014
Interesting P.O.V...
Lavonya chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
Poor Harry... I hope life gets better...
Lavonya chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
Stupid BASTARDS... Really dislike Ron and Hermione...
Lavonya chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Poor Harry...
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