damn brilliant

MY HEART. I think you wrote Ichigo's behavior on point and did a good job depicting his forced nonchalance. The description of Rukia's expression when she was disappearing was perfect too. Great job!
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Amazing work here. I have recently gotten back into the IchiRuki mood and this was just perfect. Great work!

Ichigo without Rukia is angst in itself.. But one cannot simply pass up the chance to soak in it! XD

Well done!

Oh, the angst! It hurts!

But great job, I think this could portray how he felt really accurately :)

Great story!

I just wanted to tell you this was lovely! I felt the build up and even heard it like an internal monologue. I don't think I can adequately describe it but reading this was a lot like watching a play and sitting at the edge of your seat in anticipation. I know that must sound really strange but to sum it up I really enjoyed this piece :)

Wow great job !

Oh the angst! It always drives me to tears, but I cant stop reading it. Masochism I think.

Beautiful writing, you described Ichigos emotions very clearly. Great job, goes to favorites

Oh wow...That was fantastically bittersweet, my friend! I absolutely love it, you certainly captured Ichigo's emotions perfectly!

The way you ended it was slended as well. Great job!

I really liked it! I just fell like it ended too quickly. What about when she comes back? But I really did like it! : )

ugh i'm like in tears. you are such a great writer and i'm excited to read more ichiruki fics from you. great job.

Love this: "He'd never looked at her extra long, like if he could just get close enough she would be able to anchor him to something tangible, could burn the wanting and the uncertainty bubbling in his stomach away." Yum, yum.

This angstyness fits this gloomy weather I'm having.

Ichigo better not think this way D:

Lol they're just too perfect for each other:)