Sorry, but what a shitty ending. The story was going really great until this cheap twist. Can't believe I wasted my time reading this.

Il est 3 heures du matin et je voulais absolument connaître la fin..."We both know that you think of yourself as a king." LOL !

j'ai adoré cette histoire, écrite lorsque vous aviez 19 ans ; je suis en admiration devant tant de talent et d'imagination ; ne vous arrêtez jamais d'écrire ; pour nous lecteurs, fans de Castle, c'est un régal de vous lire. Merci pour ce conte.

It was a fucking dream? It was a fucking dream?

I hate you more than a little bit right now.

A great story (despite the bait and switch at the end). Thank you for writing it.

Best,

M

Just read this from start to finish, great story, love the ending how it was all a dream its different from anything i've read :-)

Oh my God, when I read that giant twist, I yelled so loudly. I was not expecting that at all and you totally caught me off guard...I absolutely loved it! :D

I just found this story and how happy I was to read it ! I'm really glad you finished it. Thanks for that. This is one of the best AU story I've ever read ! Everyone's emotions are so well described. This story is original and at the same time although it respects the character of each. And all references to the series are excellent. And what a twist ! What I also like is that, in the dream or reality, Kate and Rick are in love with each other. Thank you very much for this wonderful story. You're a good writer because all your stories are fabulous and this one confirms it.

I was totally not expecting the twist at the end! That was awesome.

Actually, the whole story was awesome. In my head, I placed it somewhere between A Knight's Tale and Robin Hood Prince of Thieves, and it just gelled perfectly.

Thank you for writing it!

A bit disappointed that it was just a dream but hey, I love it! Thank you for writing this... XD

Asdfghjkl you totally blew me away with this story! I didn't think anyone would be able to pull off this kind of complete AU story, yet you did so flawlessly. Such a wonderfully intricate and well written story. I loved every chapter of it. And the ending! Jeeze! It almost makes me want to take away the AU classification, because it could happen in the castle-verse. Can you imagine an episode like this? I wish you were a writer for the tv series!

Wow - that was so good. Read the whole thing staying up late after the kiddos were in bed. Thank you!

I have just now found this story - it is amazing and so different. Your writing is incredible. So happy you decided to share!

I really like the idea. You've done well setting the plot up.

One thing that can definitely be improved on is your delievery. I still see some of modern english leaking through which takes away from the experience.

For example, you said "became pregnent" when it should be "with child" or something similar.

It's not big, however you're writing fantasy. To keep the reader in your world you have to have consistant language.

i'm loving this! i've spent all morning reading but now real life is calling.
thanks for entertaining me for hours. I'll be back.

I usually avoid AUs like the plague but I do love a good fantasy style story so here we go! Wonderfully written and I like your version of the characters :)

What a beautifully epic journey that was. I don't usually read this kind of story, but it kept calling to me every time I saw it here and simply couldn't resist the call any longer. I'm SO glad I gave it a chance!

Beautiful. Fantastically executed. Loved it.