Reviews for Smile before he's gone |
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Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 3 . 3/22 It's always annoying to see stories where Naruto doesn't want anything to do with konoha but it's still naruhina, his rage moments only involve him shouting and ranting and bitching as if it's going to suddenly change everyone's hearts and make them leave him alone. He doesn't like any of the konoha nin but he's talking civilly with hinata and having personal moments with her? Good writing, overused plot , bad pairing. Don't continue this |
thegrison chapter 5 . 3/18 Just a big NO! You need to read or watch the anime again. His healing does NOT work that way. There are a bunch more plot holes you skip. Get it right or research more first. |
Maranam chapter 7 . 1/2 May Narayana shine the light of heaven upon you |
khaleel chapter 8 . 1/2 may allah be with you and your family |
Rebmul chapter 8 . 12/3/2019 well its dead but interesting |
D chapter 8 . 9/23/2018 Thank you for the good story and I wish you luck and good health for the future. |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/27/2018 that's all well and fine but to the uncaring folk you are a whiney little emo |
monsterkillers124 chapter 8 . 2/9/2018 You made the right choice |
D chapter 8 . 9/4/2017 While it is regrettable that you have been too indisposed to write; it is forgivable. The fact that you responded to your situation in such a way is commendable. Unfortunately it is also a rarity today. I wish you the best in your endeavors. Post Script: It was a fine story though. |
Laialy chapter 5 . 6/20/2017 Oh god this hurts so much to read...BUT I CAN'T STOP ;-; |
Laialy chapter 1 . 6/20/2017 Daaaaaaaaaaamnnnnn |
Tohsaka143 chapter 1 . 5/25/2017 Damn this is a good story...a shame you didn't continue it |
HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 6 . 4/24/2017 Yeah go fuck yourself you Kishimoto and weak Naruto loving pissant. |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/6/2017 Seriously, why the fuck does everyone have Naruto rage on everyone yet are too big of pussies to actually kill anyone off. Makes all of the fight scenes like this boring as hell |
MaxTF chapter 7 . 2/17/2017 dude i understand the stuff about your family trust me, my parents just broke up too but common this is a great story but its been 5 fricken years |