Reviews for Everything's On Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was such an amazing story! I NEVER could have imagined this scenario! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! It was so perfect! I loved this story. This pairing is so perfect. I wish there were more stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This needs a sequel badly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() i just say wow to that it was really amazing and hot too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well writtem, nice plot :) you should definitely write more stories like this one... thanks |
![]() ![]() tHAT WAS SEXY i LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good i absolutely loved it. Perfect characterization! You're a really great writer, keep it up :) ~AT |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great one shot and I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. It had me laughing but also interested in the plot. It was realastic and true to character. I hope you plan on writing more one shots because this was a job well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I really enjoyed this! Great job writing Schueberry! I love this pairing. Hope you will write more one shots of them in the future! You wrote them both amazingly, as two people and then the two of them together! Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Is now the time to tell you that I get Claustrophobic in dark spaces?" Made me LoL! Also, when she blamed him for being stuck and he argued back at her was amusing to me. I'm kinda confused on why you keep switching from "Mr. Schuester" to "Will." Especially after things get heated. In the beginning I can see him being "Mr. Schuester" but when things grow more 'fiery' (pun intended) maybe stick with just calling him Will. "You might want to fix your buttons up." I laughed so hard I almost peed myself. I really loved this one shot. Haad the perfect mix of heat and resistance and the giving in moment was perfect. Great job lady friend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You, my friend, have done it again! Haha. This is just too good to come with the proper words to explain how much I enjoyed reading it as my cup of coffee was left on the side only to get cold... and I never neglect my coffee! I simply loved how realistic you were and how much the two characters allowed themselves to express and explore. Also, elevator sex? AMAZING! That said, I would love to know more about ther post-competition talk! GREAT job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was like one of the best fics I've read! It was brilliant! You had me from the beginning all the way to the end. I should have been working on my essay but you completely captured my attention! There was a great balance of everything needed. :) Excellent writing! |
![]() ![]() So good! I could definitely see this developing into a multi-chapter fanfic. Just sayin'. :) |