Good story! I loved Martha's note!

Lol hell yeah

Really good story, and that last line was just perfect. Gotta love Martha!

And I'll second (third, fourth, whatever) other people's comments about "Holly" - I don't know what crawled up her arse and died, but, while she's entitled to her opinion (assuming she's not just a total troll) she shouldn't be reading fanfic if she doesn't want to see things like your lust for N.F.

Off to look for more of your work!

I really enjoyed this! My only wish was that you'd taken it a little further.

cute

Nicely written. Loved the little note from his mother at the end. Thought it was a nice touch.

Love the note from Martha! LOL Great story, but that just added a perfect note of humour, which Castle is all about.

Love it! Especially the very last line :) And Alexis for helping :)

Loved it! Wonderful way of turning UST into RST. And Martha's note: hilarious!

Take care,

Sanne.

I love the ending!

Ha ha ha! I loved Martha's note at the end! Gotta love the Grand Damn... That was great! Loved it! :D

Loved it, especially the ending!

oh, Martha... love it, btw

What the fuck's up with that review "Holly" left you?

Pfft troll in the dungeon, much?

Anyway, I loved this story... Only complaint is that there wasn't any sex, just foreplay, but everything you wrote was amazing!

Nice story, Loved the ending lol